feedback-
add page numbers?
add names of the artist along the side so the audience can flick though easily
add a content page
make sure there as a a number dived by 4 for the pages, so it can be printed
Changes -
As this is a zine publication rather than a book there will not be a content page or pages number included, this is to encourage the audience read to look thought all the work rather than to focus or search for one artist in general.
there is current 50 pages in the book, as feedback showed this will need to be a number divisible by 4 to be printed, to do this a page need to be added or taken away. As the print is today i don't have time to wait or gather any more responses as it need to be printed so it can be bound and submitted and there are no more slot available before the deadline this means 1 spread will have to be removed. The spread that will be removed is Abbey Sy, this is as this is the smallest, least detailed quote therefore needed the least, if any more response come before the deadline i might read this page and the other and try to get it printed again if i have time.
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Other feedback was to add title to the pages so the audience can flick through, this would allow a solid feature on all the pages tying the layouts together whilst also improving the usability of the publication as allowing the user to search the publication faster. This should fit with the design of the publication and the style whilst not distracting for the main content. Use the same house style.
feedback -
use full name incase artists have similar initials
keep it left alined, middle seem to headerlike
try down the side?
make sure its the same on every page
If its along the side it covers up the imagery obstructing the readability and also the imagery as the layout include many images in this area, this is the same for the middle of the page. The most suitable place therefore is the top left corner as this does not cover up any content.
make final changes for print
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